Drop the last "someone reads it" phrasing, match the "we" voice used elsewhere
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applied.yaml and index.yaml still described review in the passive
third person ("someone here will read this", "taken on by someone
who reads") after project.yaml and the rest of applied.yaml's own
features had already been reworked to a direct first-person "we"
voice centered on the visitor's value, not on the fact that a person
reads it.
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@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ route: ^/applied
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name: What happens now that you've applied?
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description: >
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We're not filling a seat — we're looking for exactly what you bring
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that we don't already have. Someone here will read this personally
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and write back.
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that we don't already have. We read every one of these ourselves, in
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full, and write back.
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alternatives:
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- name: Thanks — it's in front of us
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description: ""
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@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ responsible:
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alternatives:
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- name: I want something built
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description: >
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Infrastructure, tools, or a product — taken on by someone who
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reads the whole brief before answering.
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Infrastructure, tools, or a product — we read the whole brief
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before answering.
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action: /project
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consequence: [Tell us what you're after]
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record_as: projects
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