Rework copy voice, add /review, Kanidm-gated applicant review
English URLs throughout; review.yaml adds a qualifies-gated question listing applicants via the generic NATS-KV resource mechanism, with Invite/Decline transitions. Content pass: concrete/positive phrasing (no negation constructions), warmer inclusive tone, light puns in the encouragement lines.
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id: /applied
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route: ^/applied
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name: Thanks — it's in front of us
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name: What happens now that you've applied?
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description: >
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Someone here will actually read this and write back. If it's a
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match, you'll get a personal invite next, not an automated welcome
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email.
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Someone here will read this personally and write back. A match earns
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a personal invitation, extended by hand.
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alternatives:
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- name: What happens now
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- name: Thanks — it's in front of us
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description: ""
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features:
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- name: A person reads it
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description: No filter decides for us.
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- name: You get an invite, not an account
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description: Every decision is made by someone who was actually there.
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- name: You receive a personal invitation
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description: >
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If it's a match, we hand you a real key that gives you
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access and a bit of responsibility — and, eventually, the
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ability to invite the next person yourself.
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A match earns you a real key — access, a measure of
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responsibility, and eventually, the standing to invite
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someone else in.
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