The front door opens modestly, with plain titles

The first card says what redoal is, in two features for the two people
it exists for (the one who draws, the one who leaves a voice) and no
button; the second is a look around (the live count, releases, the
iPhone beta, varde, UHHM); only then the drawing and the notes. Bold
statement titles become what-you-get titles: "Meet a network you
carry in your hand" and "Follow the build as it lands" fold into the
opener and the look-around, "Hear from us when it matters" is "Get a
note when something lands", "Hear from this address" is "Get a note
when a voice lands here", "What just happened" is "What your drawing
became", "Come draw on the wall" is "See it in person at Podium".

Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5.1 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01L4jrCgLiKKHAEFuZUJjckH

questions/exhibition.yaml

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ event:
   duration: 31d
   place: Podium, Hausmanns gate 34, Oslo
 alternatives:
-  - name: Come draw on the wall
+  - name: See it in person at Podium
     description: >
       The installation runs the same code as this site, on screens
       you can stand in front of together — the network at the scale

questions/index.yaml

@@ -1,14 +1,115 @@
 id: /
-name: What shapes us?
+name: What is redoal, and what can you do here?
 description: >
   redoal is a gesture-addressed network. Draw a line and it becomes
   an address — the drawing itself, ready to use the moment your hand
   lifts. Similar drawings land near each other, and everything else
-  follows from that. Draw one below and see who's near.
+  follows from that. What it is comes first; the drawing is further
+  down the page.
 responsible:
   name: Bendik Aagaard Lynghaug
   contact: bl@uhhm.no
 alternatives:
+  # The opener: what redoal is, in two features and no button. The
+  # two people it exists for are the one who draws and the one who
+  # leaves a voice; both keep what they made.
+  - name: What redoal is
+    description: >
+      The one trick, and what it enables — the parts that run today,
+      said plainly.
+    features:
+      - name: A drawing is an address, and yours to use
+        description: >
+          The computer measures how your line curves, turns, and keeps
+          rhythm, and boils it down to a twenty-byte fingerprint.
+          Similar drawings get similar fingerprints — two spirals land
+          like two houses on the same street, and that closeness is
+          the whole network. Your machine asks the machines around it,
+          "has anyone been near this shape?", and your spiral finds my
+          spiral directly, peer to peer.
+        icon: lucide:map-pin
+      - name: A voice stays where you left it, sealed by your own hand
+        description: >
+          A drawing is a place, and places hold voices. Listen to the
+          recordings people left at a gesture, leave your own on top,
+          and when someone stands at the same drawing right now, just
+          talk. Every recording carries a signature from the leaver's
+          own machine: keep the key and you're recognized, delete it
+          and you were never here. A child, an elder, or a newcomer
+          still learning the local script arrives on the same terms.
+        icon: lucide:mic
+
+  # The look around: nothing to fill in.
+  - name: Have a look around first
+    description: >
+      The network as it runs right now, and where it is going.
+    features:
+      - name: The count so far
+        description: >
+          Live from the front-door relay — the running tally of what's
+          been left at places.
+        icon: lucide:activity
+        resource:
+          source:
+            kind: url
+            url: https://relay.redoal.com/pulse
+          public: true
+          # /pulse (redoal ADR-0023) returns { voices_echoed: N }; shape
+          # it into one card — the number as the heading, the phrase
+          # beneath. Emit a bare object, not a wrapped [ … ]: the portal
+          # collects the jq output stream into an array itself, so a
+          # wrapping [ ] nests it ([[{…}]]) and drops to a raw JSON dump.
+          jq: >
+            { "name": (.voices_echoed | tostring),
+              "description": "voices echoed so far" }
+          empty: The first voice hasn't echoed yet.
+      - name: Releases
+        description: Run one of the desktop applications, free, no sign-up.
+        icon: lucide:package
+        resource:
+          source:
+            kind: gitea_releases
+            owner: redoal
+            repo: redoal
+          public: true
+          empty: Nothing released yet — the first cut lands here.
+          # url pinned to null while the repo is private - a private
+          # release's html_url 404s for anonymous visitors, and the
+          # card renders an unlinked heading instead (same lesson as
+          # uhhm/questions 9b7162f).
+          jq: >
+            .[] | {name: .name, description: .body, tag: .tag_name,
+            published: .published_at, url: null}
+      - name: The iPhone app, in beta
+        description: >
+          The iPhone build rides TestFlight (Apple's beta program) —
+          [join the redoal testers](https://testflight.apple.com/join/eR9dvHkz)
+          with one tap on your iPhone; no invitation, no email, no
+          waiting on us.
+        icon: lucide:smartphone
+      - name: Carried by iroh, through varde
+        description: >
+          What is left at a place is kept and mirrored by
+          [varde](https://project.uhhm.no/uhhm/varde), a small
+          daemon that moves bytes between consenting machines over
+          [iroh](https://iroh.computer) — verified, rate-limited, and
+          legible to the network it runs on. Recordings travel that way,
+          with no company carrying them.
+        icon: lucide:waypoints
+      - name: Built in the open at UHHM
+        description: >
+          [UHHM](https://uhhm.no) builds and carries the gesture math,
+          the relay, and the portal this page runs on — and hosts the
+          network's first node. It is a prototype and an artwork before
+          it is a product: what you can touch is real and running, the
+          transport that reaches across the internet is being built
+          now, and the rough edges are where the interesting questions
+          live. A client, a relay, an instrument — if you want to put
+          the network on a surface it isn't on yet, say so through the
+          path below.
+        icon: lucide:anvil
+
+  # The offers.
   - name: Draw a path and see who's near
     description: >
       By associating similar movements while facilitating discourse we
@@ -35,126 +136,7 @@ alternatives:
             relay: wss://relay.redoal.com
             optional: true
 
-  - name: Meet a network you carry in your hand
-    description: >
-      The one trick, and what it enables — the parts that run today,
-      said plainly.
-    features:
-      - name: The count so far
-        description: >
-          Live from the front-door relay — the running tally of what's
-          been left at places.
-        icon: lucide:activity
-        resource:
-          source:
-            kind: url
-            url: https://relay.redoal.com/pulse
-          public: true
-          # /pulse (redoal ADR-0023) returns { voices_echoed: N }; shape
-          # it into one card — the number as the heading, the phrase
-          # beneath. Emit a bare object, not a wrapped [ … ]: the portal
-          # collects the jq output stream into an array itself, so a
-          # wrapping [ ] nests it ([[{…}]]) and drops to a raw JSON dump.
-          jq: >
-            { "name": (.voices_echoed | tostring),
-              "description": "voices echoed so far" }
-          empty: The first voice hasn't echoed yet.
-      - name: A drawing is an address
-        description: >
-          The computer measures how your line curves, turns, and keeps
-          rhythm, and boils it down to a twenty-byte fingerprint.
-          Similar drawings get similar fingerprints — two spirals land
-          like two houses on the same street, and that closeness is
-          the whole network.
-        icon: lucide:map-pin
-      - name: Your machine asks the room
-        description: >
-          To find someone, your machine asks the machines around it:
-          "has anyone been near this shape?" Your spiral finds my
-          spiral directly, peer to peer. The whole directory is the
-          shapes people know, passed along on a napkin.
-        icon: lucide:users
-      - name: Voices stay where you left them
-        description: >
-          A drawing is a place, and places hold voices. Listen to the
-          recordings people left at a gesture, leave your own on top,
-          and when someone stands at the same drawing right now, just
-          talk — live, machine to machine.
-        icon: lucide:mic
-      - name: Sealed by your own hand
-        description: >
-          Every recording and every stored stroke carries a signature
-          from the leaver's own machine — proof that it arrived
-          intact and that the same hand made the same things. The key
-          lives only with you: keep it and you're recognized, delete
-          it and you were never here.
-        icon: lucide:stamp
-      - name: Draw and speak, and you're in
-        description: >
-          The primitives are the drawn line and the human voice. A
-          child, an elder, or a newcomer still learning the local
-          script arrives on the same terms as everyone else — that is
-          the whole entry requirement.
-        icon: lucide:hand
-      - name: Carried by iroh, through varde
-        description: >
-          What is left at a place is kept and mirrored by
-          [varde](https://project.uhhm.no/uhhm/varde), a small
-          daemon that moves bytes between consenting machines over
-          [iroh](https://iroh.computer) — verified, rate-limited, and
-          legible to the network it runs on. Recordings travel that way,
-          with no company carrying them.
-        icon: lucide:waypoints
-      - name: Built in the open at UHHM
-        description: >
-          [UHHM](https://uhhm.no) builds and carries the gesture math,
-          the relay, and the portal this page runs on — and hosts the
-          network's first node. It is a prototype and an artwork before
-          it is a product: what you can touch is real and running, the
-          transport that reaches across the internet is being built
-          now, and the rough edges are where the interesting questions
-          live.
-        icon: lucide:anvil
-
-  - name: Follow the build as it lands
-    description: >
-      The network as it is being built — and we need collaborators on
-      every new surface it grows. Desktop releases run free; the iPhone
-      beta is one tap away below.
-    features:
-      - name: Communicate
-        description: >
-          A client, a relay, an instrument — if you want to put the
-          network on a surface it isn't on yet, say so through the
-          path above and we'll find each other.
-        icon: lucide:message-circle
-      - name: Releases
-        description: Start exploring by running one of our applications.
-        icon: lucide:package
-        resource:
-          source:
-            kind: gitea_releases
-            owner: redoal
-            repo: redoal
-          public: true
-          empty: Nothing released yet — the first cut lands here.
-          # url pinned to null while the repo is private - a private
-          # release's html_url 404s for anonymous visitors, and the
-          # card renders an unlinked heading instead (same lesson as
-          # uhhm/questions 9b7162f).
-          jq: >
-            .[] | {name: .name, description: .body, tag: .tag_name,
-            published: .published_at, url: null}
-      - name: Test the iPhone app
-        description: >
-          The desktop releases above run free, no sign-up. The iPhone
-          build rides TestFlight (Apple's beta program) — [join the
-          redoal testers](https://testflight.apple.com/join/eR9dvHkz)
-          with one tap on your iPhone; no invitation, no email, no
-          waiting on us.
-        icon: lucide:smartphone
-
-  - name: Hear from us when it matters
+  - name: Get a note when something lands
     description: >
       Notes from the build — sent only when there is something worth
       saying.
@@ -175,4 +157,3 @@ alternatives:
           - name: email
             label: Email
             type: email
-

questions/shape/[key].yaml

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ alternatives:
             value: "{key}"
             optional: true
 
-  - name: Hear from this address
+  - name: Get a note when a voice lands here
     description: >
       The fallback for a phone without the app: one note when
       something is left at exactly this shape — and nothing about
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ alternatives:
             type: hidden
             value: "{key}"
 
-  - name: What just happened
+  - name: What your drawing became
     description: ""
     features:
       - name: An address, not an upload