Place page: preview-of-the-app copy, review before keeping

Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>

questions/shape/[key].yaml

@@ -7,7 +7,9 @@ name: Where does the path lead?
 description: >
   This is a place: the 20-byte address your path became — or the one
   you picked from what the network keeps nearby. Voices left here play
-  here, for whoever draws their way to this shape.
+  here, for whoever draws their way to this shape. What you see on
+  this site is a preview of the app: the same network, reached
+  through a relay instead of your own machine.
 alternatives:
   - name: Listen to what was left here
     description: ""
@@ -28,10 +30,11 @@ alternatives:
 
   - name: Leave your voice here
     description: >
-      Recorded in your browser, kept at exactly this address by the
+      A preview of what the app will give you in full. Record in your
-      relay — the first node of the network — and mirrored on from
+      browser, listen back, and press *Keep it here* — nothing leaves
-      there. The relay seals it with its own key on your behalf; a key
+      your phone before that. The relay, the network's first node,
-      of your own comes with the app.
+      keeps it at exactly this address and mirrors it on, sealed with
+      its own key on your behalf; a key of your own comes with the app.
     action: /shape/{voice.key}
     consequence: [Keep it here]
     record_as: redoal_voices
@@ -39,7 +42,9 @@ alternatives:
       - It stays where you left it.
     features:
       - name: ""
-        description: Up to a minute. Say it once; it is sealed as it is.
+        description: >
+          Up to a minute. Record, listen back, record again if you like
+          — it is sealed as it is once you keep it.
         icon: lucide:mic
         requirements:
           - name: voice